Dec 16
Here’s an incomplete rough draft of a poem I’m working on. What do you think?
Heaven on Earth (Working Title)
Is there any place more
WONDERFUL
than a
CANDY STORE?
Row after row
of glass jars
filled to the brim
with…
soft pink candies
bright gummie candies
melt-in-your-mouth chocolate candies
suckers, lollies, and blow-pops,
cotton candy
butterscotch
green apple sour
chewy caramel
smooth candy
hard candy
sugared candy
(*That’s all I have for now. What else should I include?? Smells??? Sounds??)
Thanks 5TG9 and 5P9. I’ll come back and revise this sometime. I appreciate your encouragement and ideas!
Wow! That was a really good poem and I loved how you described the candy! It made it really easy to create a sensory image! That was a very good poem!
You are making me so hungry! I wish I could have a lot of thats stuff cosidering I have my braces. I think you should add taste.